MENTOR:
Nazarea Andrews
ALTERNATE:
Portia Moore
TITLE:
Sweet Nothing
CATEGORY/GENRE:
NA Contemporary Romance
WORD
COUNT: 68,000
PITCH: Lauren was thrilled Cal gave her his his body, heart and his last name. The thing is, it wasn't his to give. It all belongs to a man named Clay and he has no idea Lauren or Cal exists.
EXCERPT:
Here he comes. My very own Prince Fucking Charming, Cal Scott. He walks
in and his eyes quickly skim the packed suitcase in my hand and briefly rest on
my face. He lets out an exasperated sigh, places his keys on the table, and
takes off his coat. His eyes fall on the empty bottle of wine I finished today,
and a smirk spreads across his face before he walks past me and into the living
room.
I’m not
surprised by his lack of response. It’s expected, but it hurts all the same. He
regards me more like his personal high-class escort than his wife.
I clutch my
suitcase, full of the very few things that are mine. He can keep the cars, the
money, and the penthouse—the things he believes should comfort me in my
loneliness. All the material things in the world can’t make up for the growing
disconnect between us. I glance down at the four-carat yellow diamond on my
finger. It’s a beautiful but painful reminder of the vows he broke.
I look over at
him, now slouched on the couch with a self-assured cocky grin plastered on his
face, the same cocky grin he was wearing the day I met him. I walk into the
living room. He’s watching a basketball game on his obnoxiously big television
screen like he hasn’t a care in the world.
I'd like to see the first six chapters please. querypam@forewordliterary.com
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